Inconspicuously Me

Its dark in here, I cannot see
A world slowly consuming me.
Breach the obscurities,
and finally come clean,
Only to find myself in between.

I lay here fallen and disenchanted
Breaking the silence
pressing me close to your warmth
I'm only a breath from aberration
Moments away from disgrace.
Falling in pieces,
I have no name.

- Jennifer Marie

Any thoughts or ideas to make it better?